| 2007-03-03 15:01:54 |
the boys of england pt 2
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seriously 2 chapters and no action, this is getting stupid. |
| 2007-03-03 15:05:33 |
the boys of england pt 2
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You said it had a blowjob... and you said that in the last chapter as well, only put these titles on the chapters that acctually have them. |
| 2007-03-04 07:52:57 |
the boys of england pt 2
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get to the action or give it up pt 1 sucked pt just as bad you 0/0 on both |
| 2007-03-07 06:38:12 |
the boys of england pt 2
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Lots of fags in England. Lots of fags who don't know how to write a good tale. |
| 2007-06-04 15:30:09 |
the boys of england pt 2
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i dare say at least he knows how to right a good story be patient and wait for the climax you have to build it up first, all of you should know that. |