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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-18 16:13:13 | The Best Pool Party ever | Good build up, but it ended up finishing far too quick |
| 2007-11-19 23:00:28 | The Best Pool Party ever | that was fucking awful. you must be a sad, lonely, desperate virgin who has no idea what it's actually like to fuck, letalone kiss someone. go out and practice, skippy, and then come back and try to write something worth reading. |
| 2008-02-05 16:16:02 | The Best Pool Party ever | A 15-16 year-old friend is gonna want to do it with the hottie he was making out with, not the ass of a buddy. I agree: "Nice beginning, but ending sucked". If your story is about a pool party, get laid in or around the pool. "I and Nick jerked each other off until we came all over Abbeys chest and tits." Sounds just like a porn video. |
| 2007-03-18 15:02:42 | For My Mistress | wonerfully written, i love the imagery, but it was sort of a letdown. i do hope you write a sequal, going into more detail about the relationship between the two characters. |
| 2007-03-21 16:49:49 | For My Mistress | Very well written, maybe a part 2 with more detail? |