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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-12 22:42:51 | Overnight Sleepover | This is crap., and not good crap either. |
| 2007-03-13 09:00:40 | Overnight Sleepover | Another pleasant story. And yes, it can easily be true. And you damn English teachers, the story is easy to read even though there are some and perhaps many grammar mistakes. anyway, I always knew who or to whom he was referring to--It doesn't take an english teacher to figure it out. Gave it a 7/10. Hope there is a second chapter. |
| 2007-03-13 11:14:30 | Overnight Sleepover | With a sentence like “I always knew who, or to whom he was referring to,” proves you are not a teacher of any kind. What you may be missing is the fact that the writer needs help. He is obviously young and inexperienced. You are greeting him with a disservice when you encourage his poor story skills. You are encouraging mediocrity by your comments. Without proper guidance, he will never become a good writer. Give him a break and tell him what is wrong. |
| 2007-03-30 00:07:12 | Overnight Sleepover | Good start but where ae the doggies?? Are they comming inside to help with the naxt time?? |
| 2007-03-30 23:51:36 | Overnight Sleepover | This is a sex story site, not a fucking university, go grade your students term papers, douchebag.... |