| 2007-10-05 13:48:31 |
Lunchtime Love
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Wow that was very sweet! As another person said though, try splitting things into paragraphs so it's easier to read. Otherwise, it was a wonderfully sweet story of two people MAKING LOVE and not just banging each other for the hell of it. I think to get that tone out is a lot harder than some people think so congratulations! Keep writing more, and don't forget to love your two friends, the "enter" key and the "tab" key, which when both loved properlly create. yup! PARAGRAPHS!! Looking forward to another great read ;) |