| 2007-03-15 22:11:14 |
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All the sex in one single paragraph? This story starts slowly (that's okay) but ends WAY too fast!
Oh and if she's "literally" the black sheep it means that she is a dark four-legged animal that gives wool... ;-) |
| 2007-03-17 03:41:34 |
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Perhaps indeed, I personally think it has a promising continuation. |
| 2007-03-17 19:50:23 |
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And then what happened? |
| 2007-03-17 22:48:33 |
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different type story,huh?
gotta be more to come,you just left it hanging
6/10 just for concept
thanx |
| 2007-04-11 23:48:48 |
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This is a really, really hot story... I wish you would continue it. |