| 2007-03-24 09:22:29 |
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When will the next chapter be ready please? I can't wait much longer!! |
| 2007-03-24 13:30:27 |
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I'm sorry, but I'm working on four stories and a BOOG at the same time. I'm about a third into MM13. Try for next weekend. They are headed for Italy now. og |
| 2007-03-24 13:33:25 |
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"Blog" |
| 2007-03-29 15:47:21 |
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Please read, "My best friend by Sexybuttaflie" While she is young and has only one story, I feel she is gifted and will go a long way. OG |
| 2007-04-01 15:28:27 |
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I wrote yhou a while ago about technical structure. Subsequently, I started back through all the episodes and found I was stacking up many pages of notes by pickeng out the errors. It wasn't that the errors were so voluminous, it was explaining them that took up the space. I've decided to regroup because, in the end you need an editor not a critic. Your story development is wonderful. Your knowledge of English useage is less strong. I really hope you try to use your talent outside porn to earn money. Meantime (I have been a managing editor for a long, long time) you make a LOT of grammatical errors and you use similar sounding words for the ones you mean (e.g., heal for heel) Please find a friend that can help while you learn. Again your talent is awesome!!! |