| 2007-11-04 13:15:48 |
After the party_(0)
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19/10 to make up for the cock monger below me |
| 2007-04-02 14:44:32 |
Chapter two
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What the hell is this story about. I started at chapter 1 and on t chap, 2 and was forced to skip thru both as there was nothing to keep my interest to read linw after , |
| 2007-04-02 15:20:04 |
alabama slammer
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wow, i have been reading here for a long time now, and this is the only story i felt ive ever needed to comment on... This has got to be one of the worst stories i have ever read. The grammar is horrible, its all on big block of type, the spelling is atrocious... and well it just plain sucks. please never write another erotic story again... it would benifit us all. |
| 2007-04-02 15:20:45 |
alabama slammer
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Paragrapghs and spelling. |
| 2007-04-02 16:58:01 |
alabama slammer
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terrible |