| 2007-05-04 19:08:17 |
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Very cute. |
| 2007-05-06 08:31:20 |
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good concept and a well righten story 9/10 |
| 2007-05-06 18:53:21 |
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excellent conept and story. 10,0 |
| 2007-05-17 19:25:05 |
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Unique concept. People have written about sex machine type things before, a notable one being the "Liquid Mind Control Device" If i do recall about a year ago.
just clean it up a bit the inconsistencies and make it a bit smoother and add to the transitions more.
6/10 |
| 2007-05-20 17:52:01 |
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Sock Man is a retard this story is new and original, and is really good stuff. I mean it has something for everybody no matter what your tastes. This is a great story dude write a second please. |