| 2007-05-05 20:14:50 |
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y cant spell for shit |
| 2007-05-06 01:26:23 |
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well apparently you cant spell for shit u dumbass you spelled YOU wrong. fucktard. i thought it was good story. |
| 2007-05-06 17:19:39 |
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good build up but not enough detail and sex. more sex would have made it near perfect. |
| 2007-05-06 19:00:59 |
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Great. |
| 2007-05-07 11:30:35 |
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beautiful... Please write more next time. |