| 2007-05-09 09:45:30 |
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shame you skipped 10 years, a couple of parts could have been added. imaginative 8/10 |
| 2007-05-11 05:25:39 |
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more plz |
| 2007-05-14 20:19:59 |
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amazing story tarkas. keep up the great work. |
| 2007-05-17 06:07:59 |
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Poor spelling, not enough sexual details, and not very believable. However, it was kind of fun "dreaming' along with you. |
| 2007-05-20 15:34:51 |
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good story, dont listen them other dumb bastards |