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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-07 10:08:52 | Allison's Uncle | Great job babe, can't wait to read more. |
| 2007-05-07 10:33:23 | Allison's Uncle | Not bad, keep writing. But re-read your writing before posting. Some parts don't make sense. Why did she keep the gag in? Was she tied down? Please don't take this as too critical, just some tips. Pretty good for first posting. Keep it up. Very good start. Thanks - a fan |
| 2007-05-07 11:54:43 | Allison's Uncle | cannot wait for the next one. write longer. |
| 2007-05-07 13:48:57 | Allison's Uncle | I got so hard I almost came with out touching my cock. Please write more and longer. Maybe Allison can fuck him in the ass with a strap on |
| 2007-05-07 14:13:45 | Allison's Uncle | I think in the next chapter, the uncle should invite his buddies over and give the niece her first gangbang. |