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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-27 17:26:34 | Allison's Uncle | make it longer plz |
| 2008-03-31 18:18:25 | Allison's Uncle | good idea.. bring up more detail to enrich the reader's experience.. the editing could have been better though.. really not a bad story though.. left abit of confusion which is fairly realistic.. did she like it? she shouldnt know and you captured it nicely. fairly realistic and good story.. needs editing and spice. that sums it up. good luck and keep writting. 6/10 |
| 2007-05-08 20:57:26 | Kalla: Ch. 3 | ok so i didnt really get it, |
| 2007-05-09 04:01:29 | Kalla: Ch. 3 | If you didn't get it, IT'S a airy tale. cute tail... You'll understand when you turn 14. The gezzer |
| 2007-05-13 03:08:55 | Kalla: Ch. 3 | Amazing story. Keep it up! |