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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-18 14:24:35 | The Mark closure (edited-rewriten) | You just don't get it. Use LAY properly. It's FOREPLAY not FOR PLAY. You also have incomplete sentences. This is why we make the negative comments. Poor composition makes for uninteresting reading. Use our comments to write better in the future. No rating on this one. |
| 2007-05-18 19:17:36 | The Mark closure (edited-rewriten) | Thanks for the input.. yes, I can take criticism an dnegitive comments in previous posts what I got for comments didn't give me any help. I also explained in my first attempt that I don't have a clue about writing and I still ask for usefull input like I see here. Simply saying "it sucks" even reader comment # 2 has to agree doesn't tell me why it's bad. thies two comments are usefull and when I start the final part of the story will deffinately help in it's completion. Is there anything els I can do to make it better? first commenter. using negative comments just to use negitive comments doesn't tell me WHY I have poor composition. but I appriciate that I need to look it it closer |
| 2007-05-22 10:21:42 | The Mark closure (edited-rewriten) | Do not worry to much about some of the comments .If you read some of the so called professional sex stories you will find the writing punctuation and spelling terrible. At the end of the day it is the content that is all important. The content in this story is very good I found it easy to follow and the story flowed Well done |
| 2007-05-23 15:55:12 | The Mark closure (edited-rewriten) | no input to your weitting just a helll yeah kept my diick in anticipation gor tthe 20 mins it ook to read |
| 2007-05-26 07:58:07 | The Mark closure (edited-rewriten) | it didn't do anything for me. 5/10 |