2007-06-11 12:23:41 |
1st Time pt3.
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Reader 23:25 as the writer of the story I am only asking for the readers to comment on where the story should go from here, I have several stories and use the readers feed back to determine the next chapter and where it goes. Chapter 4 will be out soon. |
2007-06-16 15:25:50 |
1st Time pt3.
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Fuck, this story is hot...................MORE, MORE. |
2007-07-14 17:45:46 |
1st Time pt3.
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The next chapter could have george doing the two women at the same time. It's orgy time at George's pad. Maybe they can set Tom up to acquire a social disease. LOL |
2008-04-20 01:02:08 |
1st Time pt3.
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there should be a threesome |
2007-05-18 08:07:14 |
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My opinion......."Not Bad at All" |