| 2007-05-18 11:39:31 |
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ricochet you idoit not rica shade |
| 2007-05-18 12:37:46 |
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Not bad. Did you change anything from before? |
| 2007-05-18 16:52:52 |
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You posted this 2 years ago! Why post it again now?
In all that time you just posted your second story.
They really are good but of course I want more! |
| 2007-05-18 17:16:04 |
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nice i cumed 3 times =] ... i want more of them kind of storys :P |
| 2007-05-18 17:54:07 |
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very good story, just a little constructive criticism tho, work on ur transitions and stuff, like you said and then way too many times.. then and then and then it gets old |