| 2007-07-11 16:57:17 |
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he sure like's to play with himself , no one who is normal talk's to his dick like it is a person.
he should of had his mom catch them on the table.
not a neighbor. don't talk about playing with yourself so much. proof read. |
| 2007-07-14 00:02:58 |
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You use too many words and you are too repetitive. I got bored and stopped reading about half way through. |
| 2007-07-15 05:10:42 |
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I agree, he spent too much time on getting to the good stuff, but it was worth it man. I love a long story, that way I have all day to read and have an all day erection. Kudos to you man, part 2 is kickass! |
| 2007-07-15 12:43:21 |
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nice story, but little too much details. I like it |
| 2007-07-20 14:44:43 |
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The brother kind of ruined the story for me, because he seemed to romanticize everything. It was still a fun read, though, but at some points the things he said were too absurd that I almost felt like laughing. 8/10 |