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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-30 21:46:23 | My Friend James_(1) | Not bad. I'm not gay, but I do agree that you have much potential. Don't rush the storyline, feel free to slow down some. This is too short for much enjoyment. 6/10 for potential. |
| 2007-05-31 02:39:42 | My Friend James_(1) | I liked the story too short though but keep going... |
| 2007-05-31 08:46:43 | My Friend James_(1) | Next time on "10 second porno"... |
| 2007-05-31 15:55:40 | My Friend James_(1) | yo!! nice story,,too short though,,,,its written well--compared to others! |
| 2007-07-05 20:27:02 | My Friend James_(1) | "I am so bored, dude. My parents are out of town, and since I'm an only child, i have no one to talk to." Im pretty sure no one in the world has ever said anything as lame as this- your dialogue needs to be more realistic, then- and only then will you have it, and i think you could be good. |