| 2007-05-26 18:18:31 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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not bad for your first attempt I give it a 10... Time for part two |
| 2007-05-26 20:23:52 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. What would you like to see? I have most of it already planned out, but I'm open to suggestions. I do plan to cut down on some of the excess details, all its really doing is being "filler". |
| 2007-05-27 02:21:26 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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I think it was well writtened and structured, don't cut down on the detail since they do make it much better. I give you a 10. |
| 2007-05-27 09:00:17 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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I agrfee with both of them, rather well done, esspesally for the firt try. Deffinatly a 10. |
| 2007-05-27 16:47:37 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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Very Good,,,I Cant wait for part 2,,,not bad for a newby,, |