| 2007-12-28 13:15:06 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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great story, keep brother, leave out girl |
| 2008-03-07 22:06:42 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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When i was about fourteen i gave my cousin a blowjob and swallowed his cum. I loved sucking his cock then and i still do. He shoots a lot more cum now then he did back then but i still love to swallow every drop. This story reminded me of those days. keep up the story loved it. |
| 2008-03-29 23:59:21 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 1
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I think 6 inches at age16 is perfect, actually, unless you are particularly well-endowed! Very well done, though. I would suggest this new girl be the elder cousin's age or older, and she be the new dominating character. Sorry if I'm being a backseat writer! |
| 2007-05-26 10:26:38 |
Party Store Fuck – 2
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Can't believe that no one has written a message. This is a great story even though some of it is fantasy. Should assume that if the daughters can watch, the author will be fucking them soon. Should make a wonderful chapter 2 and maybe chapter 3, since there are two daughters. Gave this story a 9/10. |
| 2007-05-26 14:27:28 |
Party Store Fuck – 2
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Pretty good story and I did notice the fantasy part when you came 4 times in a row. I would like more eroticism instead of just straight fucking though. Build up to this shit nstead of making "in your face sex". Add some passion fer Christ's sake! 8/10. |