| 2007-06-05 22:12:57 |
AShlee's Nightmare at the Beach
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sucked |
| 2007-06-12 23:41:14 |
AShlee's Nightmare at the Beach
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great story she sounded hot |
| 2007-06-14 16:21:59 |
AShlee's Nightmare at the Beach
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fantasy i9s one thing< and so is rape. But poor writing? unacceptable... |
| 2007-06-15 07:30:46 |
AShlee's Nightmare at the Beach
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Dude people need to get off of you, good story, needs some more work, but great start. Also if people don't like it don't read it. It is fantasy so if your sick too bad. |
| 2007-06-16 13:38:48 |
AShlee's Nightmare at the Beach
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Wow is all I can say, Your wife sounds fucking hot. You need to write more stories about her being raped. Wish I could help you with that. |