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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-09 14:50:59 | Daddy, Please!! | brutal spelling, and most of it does not make sense 3/10 |
| 2007-07-10 01:27:05 | Daddy, Please!! | That was pretty lousy actually. In English 101, they teach you how to write, about character development, spelling, grammar, sentence structure and so on. The basic idea you have is good and it would make a great story if you would just slow it down and flesh it out. This really was pretty bad though. 2/10. |
| 2007-07-10 07:54:53 | Daddy, Please!! | Good do chapter 2 |
| 2007-07-12 17:07:29 | Daddy, Please!! | Work on the Grammer, but other than that, its pretty good. By all means, write Chapter 2. |
| 2007-07-14 22:24:10 | Daddy, Please!! | that was terrible. |