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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-11 12:27:23 | A little help | Try writing another chapter and include more details about the people. work the details into the story. If you notice the only comments say the same thing. readers love details about the people. It makes them more real. Hair color? shaved or not? Guess you get the idea. Have you continued the sex or was it one time? There has to be more to the story. |
| 2007-06-11 13:39:27 | A little help | good get the whole family in on it |
| 2007-06-11 14:24:09 | A little help | i thought that was brilliant. i don't need to know tons of bullshit details about the protagonists. a bit short, 's all. voted 9 though. |
| 2007-06-11 15:49:47 | A little help | Good story but could have expounded on some of the details. I think a little history of your past relationship with the moth-in-law would have made it easier to believe the story. You got to fuck her too quickly and she was willing to accept you, also too quickly. We used wallpaper throughout our house--Should have used paint. Gave it a 9/10. |
| 2007-06-11 17:28:01 | A little help | Now that is a happpy mother fucker |