| 2007-10-15 23:40:20 |
Debbie Gets Pumped - part-2
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Ur one fucked up human being. The story didn't turn me on at all. To posess a brain like urs is just a dirty shame. |
| 2007-10-31 12:57:00 |
Debbie Gets Pumped - part-2
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I like wild imagination...as long as no one gets off-base and steps over into the real world of sexual assault. Keep it fantasy....the wilder or crazier what the fuck...just don't step over people! |
| 2007-12-15 15:00:39 |
Debbie Gets Pumped - part-2
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I love it. wish your would treat her to more in another story! |
| 2007-06-11 10:24:49 |
hokey
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It's a bit better but still need to work on paragraphs to make easier reading. |
| 2007-06-11 18:43:48 |
hokey
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Good and hot story! Thanks for writing & sharing it with us. And, yes, some paragraphing and some quotes would make it better. But I loved it and hope you will write more. :-) |