| 2007-06-13 10:59:32 |
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ok.... |
| 2007-06-15 11:19:30 |
Blood & Lust
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It was a good story no sex that's okay but it needs some major editing. MAJOR EDITING!!!!!! |
| 2007-06-18 03:42:23 |
Blood & Lust
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good storyline, confusing sometimes jumping from third person to first person. but hope to see more . |
| 2007-06-25 05:46:43 |
Blood & Lust
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i enjoyed it greatly nice work. |
| 2007-07-03 03:12:09 |
Blood & Lust
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Confusing, to say the least, and what's with this author's fascination with death? Maybe he needs to repose on a couch and tell a shrink what's wrong with him. |