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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-13 16:36:20 | Requiem | Although your writing is good (fair enough inspiration, to say the least), you lack good metre or any regularity in your verse. Try reading your poems aloud, & learn about their stress & metre, the patterns come fairly naturally. |
| 2007-06-13 19:29:20 | Requiem | It's not poetry, it's certainly not about love, it's so confused! Your repeat so much it just gets boring, and there is no rhythm to it. |
| 2007-06-15 00:02:10 | Requiem | Not all poems have rhythm |
| 2007-06-18 05:53:34 | Requiem | Look, you obviously wanted to tell your love how you feel about him/her, but this is no more a poem than I'm Winston Churchill. Enough said. Don't write any other "poems," please. |
| 2007-06-27 06:08:45 | Requiem | it was good and i loved an you are right not all poems have rythm and i am a poet myself so i should know |