| 2007-06-18 23:00:15 |
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HOLEEEE SHIT THAT WAS A GOOD STORY
but way too long i had to read it in like parts where i get up and move from my ass hurting from sitting down so long.
other than that it was a great story and i will read your other stories soon. |
| 2007-06-18 23:21:33 |
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seriously kudos to you... this was an excellent story... i seriousy think you should copywrite it and sell it yourself... i'm sure there's a company out there that will sell it... but this was an excellent story... thank you for writing it |
| 2007-06-18 23:36:28 |
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I would not be surprised if this is the work of a pro. Long yet interesting. It is really one of the best stories i have read in a long time. Excellent work. |
| 2007-06-19 01:35:13 |
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Jesus...Could it be any longer? 3 hours... The best STORY I ever read. Not just erotic stories. It wasn't like a lot of the other ones on this site. This one had a plot, and had more to it then the sex scenes. 10/10. I would love a sequel. I love it... |
| 2007-06-19 02:20:21 |
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damn.....damn.....daaaaaamm... that was the best story i have ever read.....EVER! |