| 2007-06-20 01:24:02 |
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Extremely long, but worth it. |
| 2007-06-20 04:59:30 |
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too good dude.u'r great.i am bored of the usual stories but i'll tell u this. i will never forget this in my life |
| 2007-06-20 07:18:13 |
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I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Everything just clicked into place in this fantastic tale. The teasing in between the girls is so realistic in the fact that it reminds me of my twin sons who can't leave each other alone.
The whole "psychic" thing was wonderful and slightly added to a reality aspect of this story. What I really loved in this story, is just that...the love. Not a story of just sex sex sex its wonderful. If I could I would easily rate this well over one hundred. You are a wonderful writer and I cannot wait to read the sequel, please keep up the great work.
~~Daemon~~ |
| 2007-06-20 11:50:51 |
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that story kicked serious ass |
| 2007-06-20 12:26:50 |
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Every author and potential author should
read this story. Extremely well crafted love story. |