| 2007-07-23 22:42:28 |
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Simply Brilliant! 10/10 |
| 2007-07-24 00:20:11 |
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This is a hard story for me to comment on. Let me first say I did NOT read it for the little girl content, I read it for the fact that it was at the top of the poplar stories list. Having ADHD makes it difficlt to read longer stories, but the shorter stories lack any complexity that makes them worth reading. Let me add that having been falsely brought on charges of indecent conduct with a minor, it made me uncomfortable to read most of the story. Now with all that said, I could not possibly put it aside. I read it end to end. I agree with the recent comment that 9 and 10 is pushing the too young limit, but must say that it is magnificently written and is a very attractive story! The one thing that I expected that did not happen was Tom and Susan becomins an item and the entire family being 'together' but I think the ending that was written fits the story so much better and doesn't leave the bad taste of a typical cliche' happily-ever-after ending, though it is quite obvious that it is sch an ending. I will be looking for more work from this author, and will suggest you to others! You have my vote of 15 out of a possible 10. |
| 2007-07-25 00:22:29 |
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Brilliant. I read this because it was at the top of the charts. I am not to sure if I am a really slow reader or the author is fast, because it took a lot more than the time hinted to finish. Saying that. What a read. Even though the subject was about under age goings on. It did not read like that. A story that had emotion, joy and respect for all concerned. I am not at all surprised at the morons that can only utter a few mindless four letter words. No doubt anything longer than a dirty poem on a toilet wall is all their small minds can handle at a time. I have a true story on here and have been trying to make up my mind whether to submit another due the it's epic length. But after reading this and seeing the great response I shall be doing just that. It's a pity we can only mark this out of 10 as I think it rates at least 20. Great job. Keep them coming. |
| 2007-07-25 02:04:55 |
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hey man, dont listen to these fucks who dont liek your story. They are just mad because they cant read. You wrote and awesome story. I am always looking for a good book to read. I really loved the ending, and I hope you wright more. |
| 2007-07-25 11:47:54 |
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i swear this could be published. and i would buy it.
anyone who thinks this is sick should rethink' cuz- its an excellent piece of work *thumbs up* |