| 2007-07-15 05:39:55 |
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you sick cunt. this cant be legal. i hope you get found out and castrated. dirty pedo scum. |
| 2007-07-15 05:53:37 |
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This is the best story i've ever read on xnxx. It's great that he loves them about who the twins are and not just for their bodies. I really liked the end and the last six lines. 10/10 |
| 2007-07-15 17:49:36 |
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Stopped reading when it said the girls were 10 & 9 years old.
You are one sick fucking pedo and I hope you burn in hell!
SICK SICK SICK |
| 2007-07-16 10:32:29 |
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Hmm while the theme is questionable, it is pulled-off by brilliant writing. The most well-written story on XNXX. Thankyou. |
| 2007-07-16 16:26:01 |
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I have read all your stories this one is good, you state it is not your work and does seem like a complete work of fiction.
As for the jade series that seems to have alot of truth to it. how ever i don't support your actions in life and i may have an issue with your integrity,. How ever I am not going to bash you as so many here have. you are a good writer. and you seem to have a caring and loving heart. your intentions seem pure and open with jade but im my opinion i believe you should stop all intimate contact. you can still be friends and love eachother but hold off the love making until jade reaches legal age.
Again you show alot of tallent in writing. keep it up, maybe persue a career in short stories to pass your time until jade reaches 18. just a suggestion.
Have a good life |