| 2007-07-19 03:54:50 |
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YOU ARE FUCKING SICK MAN!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2007-07-19 06:58:58 |
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I don't think it's sick, then again I didn't find it erotic. I like the way this is written and presented.
9 year old girls are a tad too young and it puts Tom into a definate "pedofile" ranking. But I like the fact that although he loves them becuase they are young girls and that his fortay that he also loves them for their gifts and personalities.
This story is exceptional. If it wasn't classed as an errotic tale and was long enough for novel status I would definatly buy it.
10/10 from me. |
| 2007-07-20 01:14:05 |
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Hey man that was awesome u really should write books. It was amazing story Rivaled on by End of the world. total 10. Keep the good work coming. |
| 2007-07-21 02:46:23 |
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Mmm i know im not a memeber but i love this story not for erotic but i loved it beacause its a story not a short story it has the makings of a story i really like it. |
| 2007-07-21 16:23:57 |
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The end left me with tears in my eyes, and for a "sex with little girls" thats awsome....and for the the ones bithing about the young ages- - - get a life! |