| 2007-06-24 16:05:22 |
Summer Shower
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more more more where is part 2 please |
| 2007-06-24 19:59:21 |
Summer Shower
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it was awsome 10/10.just need to work on grammer so we can understand what your saying better.!!! =) |
| 2007-06-25 00:04:53 |
Summer Shower
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part 2 plz and do it quick |
| 2007-06-30 13:08:39 |
Summer Shower
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the basic concept and theme are great but the structure needs to be better, just like some other readers said. this story has potential to be great. 7/10. |
| 2007-08-15 08:33:59 |
Summer Shower
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Hope this fucking story is as true as the comments. Looking forward to the next chapter. Have read this story in the past and enjoyed reading it again. |