sexstories.com
Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-23 15:45:31 | Summer Shower | fucking prevert, that's before a pervert. Bro/sis relationships just don't work out, besides there illegal. you'll have her pregnant by seeptember |
| 2007-06-23 18:39:11 | Summer Shower | when will the fuckin idiots on this site learn? read the content bit after the title, if there's something there you don't like or don't agree with, then fine, read something else...don't click on it to have a bitching session! fighting on the internet makes both sides a loser...but complaining about something that no-one forced you to read, and demoralising the writer, that just makes you fuckin pathetic. as far as constructive crtisism goes...you need paragraphs, and names (even if you only use alias'), oh, and try writing it in Word and then hitting spell and grammar check, then copy it across...that way you'll only have the little-minded pricks writing you bad comments... keep writing, i'd like to see where this goes, 8 the_happy_leprechain - booted for speaking the truth |
| 2007-06-23 23:37:11 | Summer Shower | so why don't all of you go teach kindergarden and leave to read porn 10/10 |
| 2007-06-24 08:05:09 | Summer Shower | Past comments are telling you that the writing is bad but the content is good. Those of us reading this story get the idea that you don't read. Otherwise, you would use what has been suggested in other comments--good grammar, paragraphs, and to write it as a story and not as a bang, bang, thank you mam kind of encounter. That must be some hot sister that you have you lucky bastard. I would give it a 6 as written but a better rating if you would use what is suggested in the comments. |
| 2007-06-24 08:41:35 | Summer Shower | Part 2 please! |