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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-25 09:47:56 | Families pain 2 | It seems the story changes from comments by one person to another without much identification of who is narrating. |
| 2007-06-25 16:53:06 | Families pain 2 | i agree ...confusing to sat the least , was the same in the last part ... maybe a different hobby might be a good idea ? |
| 2007-06-28 02:48:02 | Families pain 2 | the story changing in each para plz write more focussed |
| 2007-08-29 22:34:46 | Families pain 2 | Sorry, you write like an uneducated twelve year old. |
| 2008-01-01 15:28:45 | Families pain 2 | it changes naratoor through the story |