| 2007-07-01 01:06:13 |
The Making 4
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I would like to read the first three please. Where are they? |
| 2007-07-06 17:38:22 |
The Making 4
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this one was much better then the other ones me and my girlfriend cumed twise i can't wait to read the next one. |
| 2007-07-14 22:59:08 |
Chapter 1 nightmares
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What the fuck was this? If this was groundwork, you should have included the next four chapters. There's nothing in this that would compel me to read your next offering. |
| 2007-07-15 09:06:21 |
Chapter 1 nightmares
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lol ff8 ..............good |
| 2008-01-08 08:22:01 |
Chapter 1 nightmares
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Talk about crap, this was so fucking boring I couldn't finish. It sucks beyond belief. You call yourself a writer, Don't make me laugh |