| 2007-07-01 02:59:45 |
Me and my Friend Ashley
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Stupid as fuck. |
| 2007-08-13 04:52:39 |
Me and my Friend Ashley
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It was OK, with a little practice you will do better. |
| 2007-08-17 17:09:27 |
Me and my Friend Ashley
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You left it open so you have a chance to improve, proofread, spellcheck, extend your plot, give it some more time and you should be fine. Keep trying. |
| 2007-10-05 12:15:19 |
Me and my Friend Ashley
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t was ok but you need to spell her right and also spell here right. you got the two mixed up. |
| 2008-02-14 23:00:29 |
Me and my Friend Ashley
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its an ok story you really need to work on how it was written. the story sounded like someone very very young wrote it. work on sentence structure and grammar. |