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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-03-27 19:09:20 | Chapter 1 nightmares | crap!!! |
| 2007-06-28 05:43:09 | Me and my Friend Ashley | use more detail then the next one might be better |
| 2007-06-28 07:16:19 | Me and my Friend Ashley | pathetic |
| 2007-06-28 07:18:15 | Me and my Friend Ashley | i agree its ok for your first story i have read almost every story on here and i think yours is ok compared to some so more detail i also loved the ending it keeps the reader on there toes or in this case with there hands full |
| 2007-06-28 18:46:21 | Me and my Friend Ashley | You must be another young writer and not 19 as stated. I agree with the reader who made the one- word comment at 07:16. If I were you, I would start again and give more detail concerning each event whether a fucking or a blowjob. And get someone to proofread your stories. When stories are poorly written, as your story is, I lose interest right away. You have heard of foreplay--Then use it. Gave the story a 3/10. |