| 2007-09-03 12:23:01 |
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What's the deal with all the different names?
If you're going to write this stuff, at least make sure you know who you're talking about.
You mixed up Chad and Jeff on multiple occasions, and who the fuck is todd??
Good story but really damn long. |
| 2007-09-04 05:29:25 |
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begining is romantic and sex appealing but the ending is fucking awful. cut the shit out plz. it can make story without the end....
do more work u fucker!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2007-09-10 01:33:03 |
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wauuuuu beautiful and so nasty.
Some years ago I saw a girl get horse cum on her, while impregnateing another horse. This story brought back some very nasty thoughts in me. Damm it I loved it. |
| 2007-09-21 18:01:14 |
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lots of mistakes in the grammar and punctuation, but if that u britney, i fuck u even harder then chad |
| 2007-11-01 11:03:19 |
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Damn girl! I rarely jerk off to stories,but this one just got me goin'. |