| 2008-03-29 23:11:28 |
Midnight Swim
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fu buddy, this story is great, and I even go to look up some great new bands since he named them. If you listen to some of the songs (I use project playlist) then you would know that some of the songs enhance the story |
| 2008-03-31 23:53:59 |
Midnight Swim
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dude in the last part u called her lydia lydia is in locked out bt other then that i loved the story ur my fav erotic story writer |
| 2008-04-03 22:00:22 |
Midnight Swim
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This was an amazing piece of work, it is stories like this that have made me write my own which will soon be here. A part two of this would be amazing, just make sure to reread your work you did have a few spelling problems that brought me back to the real world and stop picturing what was going on. |
| 2008-04-21 16:16:08 |
Midnight Swim
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Wow! That was incredibly sweet! I wish my first time had been like that! I wish I had a boyfriend that cared enough to even think about it! That was an amazing story thanks for sharing |
| 2007-08-20 06:31:13 |
The Prego Club Pt.16
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Hope there is more soon...really good story. |