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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-03 20:49:45 | Midnight Swim | hey wats the name of part 2 gonna be? |
| 2007-09-04 09:32:39 | Midnight Swim | Just guessing, but Lydia may have been the original name the author used and just missed editing one entry in the final draft. All in all not a bad work. Some spelling and grammatical errors, but the heat and passion were there. |
| 2007-09-05 17:12:39 | Midnight Swim | let me fuck you, please, anybody who can write out every other girl's fantasy that way deserves some good fucking |
| 2007-09-05 19:39:43 | Midnight Swim | Author....you should be extremely proud of this work you worte. It is a amazing story, romance, friendship, it just has everything. I strongly encourage you to write a part 2 to this. I do think some of the gramatical errors could be fixed, but of course no one is perfect. I will be checking for a part 2 in hopes of reading it. Keep up the good work. -Krymzon |
| 2007-09-05 21:59:02 | Midnight Swim | that was awesome. Please write a part 2. ill be checking regularly. -Fucker |