| 2007-08-24 19:10:55 |
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i think a slightly more belieavle age might have been better i.e 11 at least |
| 2007-08-25 18:11:02 |
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not very believable, but well written an enjoyable still. |
| 2007-08-26 02:29:09 |
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Very well written, i do not have a fetish for this kind of thing, but i do find it interesting to read.
well put together, nice flow to it.
well done
8/10 |
| 2007-08-26 14:47:19 |
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You say pedophelia is the last taboo. Pal, it should always be the absolute worst thing in the world, a taboo for all time. It is unspeakable to think of having sex with a child. Shame on you. |
| 2007-08-26 20:28:46 |
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This is a very well written story. It isnt something I would ever do but in a fictional story it is so nice. |