| 2007-11-19 21:48:22 |
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Absolutely amazing. 9/10 |
| 2007-12-30 10:07:03 |
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سكس |
| 2008-03-03 21:05:30 |
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i usually like taboo stories like this, but i'm really sick to my stomach right now. |
| 2008-03-06 00:13:54 |
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Amazzzing! Definately not my taste but you wrote so well that you did turn me on, until I remembered that my grand daughter in the next room is 2 years older. Then I felt sick. You write too well to waaste yourself on this age group |
| 2008-03-17 00:12:38 |
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Nice story Chagrin. You write with a lot of sex, but also with a sense of drama and place and character. |