| 2007-08-27 17:24:13 |
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how bout a sequel maybe the guy finds emma in a few years? and they end up living together somehow? |
| 2007-08-30 15:27:25 |
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Well done Chargrin. |
| 2007-08-31 01:51:16 |
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Wow, that was amazing, very few stories i have read on this site in any category have that kind of emotion to them. while reading the story i was completely turned on, and i thought their departure rather sweet, and also very saddened by the last bit. not because she doesnt stay but because if this was true that is exactly the kind of thing that would happen and well it hits you really hard. i do agree with one of the previous readers 08-28-07 - 17:24 that would be a very nice conclusion, somthing like he saves her life from one of those more abusive customers, they become full time lovers, she lives with him and he treats her right. somthing sweet like that. you do bloody good work my friend. sex story or not this is a true display of literary talent. best of luck in the future. 10/1 |
| 2007-08-31 01:57:02 |
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it actually is a 10/10 the character count cut me off and i meant 08-27 not 08-28 my bad |
| 2007-10-08 08:02:41 |
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aww that was sweet, made me really sad though at end with the whole reality check thing about how her luck would eventually run out, but a very good read none the less. i do hope you wright more tales of such outstanding quality, while you did finish this one off perfectly a part two would be grand. good work on this 10/10 |