| 2007-08-24 12:17:56 |
Case of the Cocked Hand
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Good on ya mate,you acuatly get into the back grounds of the main characters,letting the reader get to know the person(s) there reading about.I also liked how you dont just have like paragraph after paragraph of just sex,this is an actual story,verygood by the way,but the part where he put all the pieces togeather was a little chopy,but you have talent mate,Id like to see this turn into a series,like,maybe the next one could be about a drug lords wife,and how her and Tom maybe team up to take him down cuz he abuses her,but then she betrays Tom,and gets away with all the money,and that'd be part one hahaha,but any way great story 9/10 |