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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-27 20:20:24 | Case of the Cocked Hand | I love it when people want to complain about spelling and they spell words wrong in their comment i.e. Also it is too long (Reader 08-24-07 - 21:30). I also like the people who complain about the story being "too long" and the author clearly gives a warning in the intro. J miller, This is probably one of the best written stories posted here. Great Job! Keep writing. 10/10 |
| 2007-08-27 21:21:26 | Case of the Cocked Hand | I think that this story was well written, very good descriptions and visualizations. If I have any advice, it would be that you fell into the trap of trying to put too many plot changes into one story. If it takes 5 chapters to tell the story, use 5 chapters or more. I try to write at least 5000 words per chapter and it took 14 chapters to write “Liquid Mind Machine”. JMT |
| 2007-08-27 23:17:20 | Case of the Cocked Hand | I appreciate the suggestion regarding story length. I had not intended for the story to be so long but I did not want to have chapters. My previous 'end of the world' story was in chapters. It had great reviews but has all but disappeared. I believe that is because most readers do not want to invest in a many-part story. I plan on writing a few more 'case of' stories but each will be self contained. I'm not sure which words are misspelled at spell-checker said it was clean. I suppose it could be a valid, though incorrect word. jmiller |
| 2007-08-28 00:13:09 | Case of the Cocked Hand | It is a very well written story, and I loved it. I started reading for obvious purposes, but I continued readin it jst because it was so interesting. |
| 2007-08-28 00:13:09 | Case of the Cocked Hand | It is a very well written story, and I loved it. I started reading for obvious purposes, but I continued readin it jst because it was so interesting. |