| 2007-08-28 02:00:54 |
Case of the Cocked Hand
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excellent.... very good story although i fiugred out paula to be the robber in the very beginning.... but still a damn good job.... probably the best story i've read here so far. 10/10 |
| 2007-08-28 19:59:15 |
Case of the Cocked Hand
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That was enticing.... |
| 2007-08-29 01:17:22 |
Case of the Cocked Hand
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haha, dude you should just wrtie mystery novels or something, that was pure story. |
| 2007-08-29 13:43:40 |
Case of the Cocked Hand
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it was a good story but it was a little long other wise good 8/10 |
| 2007-08-29 16:19:19 |
Case of the Cocked Hand
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very good story, its a shame if you don't make this into a novel, 10/10 |