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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-31 14:09:57 | Camryn: C10 | good ending |
| 2007-08-31 18:41:02 | Camryn: C10 | Eh dude. Keep up the good work. You've got real talent here and you should be careful how you use it. I have thoroughly enjoyed both your stories and i wouldn't be suprised if u get offered to hav them made into short films. Eh man that was a stunner. Anyway dude good luck for the future. You are absolutely great!!! |
| 2007-08-31 23:25:24 | Camryn: C10 | the whole story was awesome!! the sex scenes were mostly either creepy or too short, but it was a really good storyline. |
| 2007-09-01 01:56:10 | Camryn: C10 | Weird... Learn the difference between "then" and "than". Several times your used "than" when you should have used "then". If you want to continue to write, I suggest that you find someone who is well-educated enough to proof read your material BEFORE publishing it! |
| 2007-09-01 20:04:55 | Camryn: C10 | i find it a bit strange that camryn, the stories namesake and the girl of his dreams has less sex than her sister, and her sister always seems to get first dibs. you're definitely a gifted writer, but i dunno, something is a bit off |