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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-27 10:12:47 | Camryn: C10 | I agree. If I had a brother, there's no way in fucking hell he'd get at my girlfriend. She wouldn't let him anyways. We're both pretty loyal. We usually do one-on-one, but she gets extremely horny occasionaly, in which case she calls her best friend over. They're like sisters, and I don't complain, obviously. As long as my girlfriend's cool with it. They do a great double titty-fuck =D |
| 2007-10-12 12:24:03 | Camryn: C10 | Read the whole thing- great work! Any idiot can write about two people having sex, but you managed to develop deep characters with real feelings. This felt like a true story! Just keep a check on the grammar and spelling and you'll go far! |
| 2007-10-17 14:01:07 | Camryn: C10 | Like the emo, kinda makes the characters look more mature, well you should keep in mind that "than" is different than "then", cause you keep using "than" when you're meant to use "then", yeah, that's about all...you're a good writer though, better than most, you're on the right path mate... Thanks loads |
| 2007-10-31 19:06:43 | Camryn: C10 | Great story. No more need be said! |
| 2007-11-02 00:06:59 | Camryn: C10 | Your a good writer but there is too much going on in the story that complicates it and makes it not very arousing. Overall All Stories 7/10 |