| 2007-09-07 05:16:22 |
Jamie makes a new friend!!! part 2
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Totally awful writing. It could have been fun, but the author of this had no skills in erotic writing. What a shame. |
| 2007-09-08 10:54:00 |
Jamie makes a new friend!!! part 2
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awful writing yes....i was rushed to get this story out, and now i have some comments on it, it will be improved |
| 2007-09-04 04:19:02 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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beuark !!! very bad 3/10 |
| 2007-09-04 05:33:48 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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truely deeply poor in english and a very pathetic grammar. this is totally crap! fucking stupid piece of shit.! on my mercy, i'll giv u 110. you should thanks me anyway. |
| 2007-09-04 10:36:15 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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Very Hot! I'd like that 38D in my mouth! |