| 2007-09-06 21:53:44 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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Brother, you need help with your writing. It's awful with a capital "A." It was hard to follow and figure out your fucked-up grammar, so I just stopped after reading maybe 20 lines. 2/10 |
| 2007-09-06 23:53:03 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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The bad reviews were obviously written by people who can't write one of these themselves. Actually this wasn't bad, just needs some English language smoothing. Rated it a 7... |
| 2007-09-10 07:31:58 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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Sorry to say it, but these people are right. You don't understand sentence structure, grammar or the concept of a paragraph. |
| 2007-09-15 14:03:46 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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For all you tossers who slated her.....it is a diary entry grammer and spelling do not need to be correct. True it would help the story flow, but it wasnt bad. If you don't like it, don't read it. It is ironic how many of those complaining have made grammer or spelling mistakes too, for example missing out full stops or not having capital letters. 7/10 |
| 2007-10-02 13:49:42 |
Rape from a mom's point of view
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nice |