| 2007-09-06 09:14:43 |
Kim Possible (The Better Revised Version)
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Ok like everyone here is write :o grammer mistake right* by the way if you have ever seen the show it might have helped also what sort of shit where you smoking when you wrote this i mean seriously did you read it and yes i made punctuation mistakes but this is not a story |
| 2007-09-07 00:32:19 |
Kim Possible (The Better Revised Version)
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You are more of a retard |
| 2007-09-07 05:13:03 |
Kim Possible (The Better Revised Version)
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You say you've rewritten this story because the original couldn't write, spell, etc. And then you write: "I've took it upon myself." Jeeeezus. What do you call that kind of writing? Holy shit. "I've took it upon myself"???? |
| 2007-09-10 22:18:09 |
Kim Possible (The Better Revised Version)
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I stopped reading @ the begining cause its a piece of shit!!! |
| 2007-09-11 10:46:03 |
Kim Possible (The Better Revised Version)
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Lol this isnt what he wrote! this is wat the orignal author wrote, he just used proper grammer marks on it, so instead of saying "he cant write worth shit" its not him who wrote it |